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PostSubject: Joel Jackson's MPF Application   Joel Jackson's MPF Application EmptyMon Sep 17, 2012 2:46 am

**OOC portion**
Steam username: TPG | YoungKnightMax
SteamID: STEAM_0:0:36652175
Ban history: 1 ban of 30 minutes for stealing from the CWU.(Lying here will stick out because bannable behavior will cause you to be banned instantly)
Past RP experience: I have ran many HL2RP servers, also Darkrp non-serious and serious+modified DarkRp. (All RP counts)
Past CP experience:No CP experiences. But i want to make it here, on a "non dead" server. (Open Aura or other serious RP gamemodes count. DarkRP does not)
RP example:
[StoryTeller] Someone left the Nexus Door Open
[Citizen] runs into the Nexus
[Me] Stand still there Citizen!
[Citizen] /me gasps
[Me] Face the wall
[Me] Apply
[Citizen] Citizen 135125
[Me] /me Checks the data
[Me] You are given 1 penalty point
[Me] Keep facing the wall.
[Me] Ties up the man (resist?)
[Citizen] does not resist
[Me] /me tied up the man
[Me] Prepare for your Civil Punishment
[Citizen] Nooo
[Me] /me Grabs out his Stunstick begins to laugh and puts the stunstick on.
[Me] /me Starts slapping the Citizen and laughs
[Citizen] Agh. noo aaah.
[Me] I hope you learned your lesson
[Me] /me Picks the man up and throws him on a bench at the Plaza
(Use commands from OA (20 lines minimum) or type up a short story)
Character backstory:
I was 15, when the war begun. I was sleeping and then i heard sounds. I heard helicopters gunfire people scream. I standed up, and then i felt the earth shake. The closet fell down and all the clothes were spread in the Appartment, i was shocked and walked to the window. I saw tanks outside destroyed, i looked up the air. The Air was dark. Then i looked on the Clock. It was 9:00 in the morning. I have been looking in the air more, i saw long helicopters flying in the air shooting down. I looked at it, and the driver of it looked at me and started shooting. The glass broke and pieces of glass flew trough the air, i was knocked to the ground.
I opened my eyes and there were two strangers in my room. They had blue suits, yellow eyes and had massive guns in their hands. As one took a small stick, with a bleu dot on hit and hit my head. I was half awake and saw they took me somewhere. They took me to some kind of room. And knocked me down for good. I think i have been down for weeks. As i waked up the same-looking guys came in the Room and carried me to another room. There was a chair in the middle of the Room. They put me on it and locked my feet and hands on it. One of them laughed. As suddenly a machine came down the roof. It got attached to my head. From then i didn't know anything and i was at the C18 trainstation.
(Long (3 Paragraphs Minimum). No rambos/perfect people/ex-cops, marines, FBI or CIA.)
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**IC portion**
Name: Joel Jackson
Age: 20
Birth year: 1996-11-16
Past crimes: None
Medical/Engineering experience: No
If yes, which (or both) and explain:
Why do you want to join the Union?: I have seen alot of Rebels do stuff. CWU getting robbed. People threatened, Slums doors open ALOT. Contraband comes around many times. I want to stop those
Any other information you wish to share?: (none)


Last edited by maxcharacters on Tue Sep 18, 2012 3:10 am; edited 2 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Joel Jackson's MPF Application   Joel Jackson's MPF Application EmptyTue Sep 18, 2012 12:08 am

maxcharacters wrote:

Any other information you wish to share?: Becoming MPF means alot to me. I want to make this awesome HL2RP experience.


Don't you think you should answer this IC'LY since this is from the IC part of your app.
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PostSubject: Re: Joel Jackson's MPF Application   Joel Jackson's MPF Application EmptyTue Sep 18, 2012 2:12 am

I have found several typos or just some sentences that just don't make sense. Read through your app again and try to find the right terminology. The RP isn't that bad but it's rather lacking in size. But you're new to MPF so I'll give you that one.

Just read through it again, maybe look up a guide to MPF and learn some things to help you.
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PostSubject: Re: Joel Jackson's MPF Application   Joel Jackson's MPF Application EmptyTue Sep 18, 2012 2:25 am

Xylos wrote:
I have found several typos or just some sentences that just don't make sense. Read through your app again and try to find the right terminology. The RP isn't that bad but it's rather lacking in size. But you're new to MPF so I'll give you that one.

Just read through it again, maybe look up a guide to MPF and learn some things to help you.

This ^
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PostSubject: Re: Joel Jackson's MPF Application   Joel Jackson's MPF Application EmptyTue Sep 18, 2012 3:07 am

Ah okay, thanks i will look in my spelling!
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PostSubject: Re: Joel Jackson's MPF Application   Joel Jackson's MPF Application EmptyTue Sep 18, 2012 3:15 am

Fixed my spelling a bit, thanks guys
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PostSubject: Re: Joel Jackson's MPF Application   Joel Jackson's MPF Application EmptyTue Sep 18, 2012 5:37 am

A few spelling mistakes but not everyone can have perfect spelling.
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