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PostSubject: Jack Henderson metro police app redone   Jack Henderson metro police app redone EmptyThu Aug 30, 2012 4:57 am

**OOC portion**
Steam username:[Rec] Jack[TGS]
SteamID:0:1:43202752
Ban history:I have never been banned (Lying here will stick out because bannable behavior will cause you to be banned instantly)
Past RP experience: I play alot of HL2rp im a really big nerd at it love it i dispise dark rp with a passion i have played new vegas rp aswell .
Past CP experience: I have been cp many times highest rank i got to was DVL and i have also been OTA alot times
RP example: (this is not a real /me kinda thing just incase you thougt i had ban way with MPF i dont this is fiction)
/me Jack henderson goes on a small jog
MPF /Y Citizen Stop right there!
/me Stop's
MPF do you know why i stopped you citizen?
Me: For jogging officer?
MPF: Yes
Me: What is my punishmeant officer?
MPF: Warning but next time you will be punished
ME: Shivers at the thought of the MPF punishing him
ME: It won't trust me Officer.
MPF: /me walks away
/it 1 hour passes
ME: /me Breaks into a run across the plaza
MPF: /me notices the citizen he talked to earlyer running again.
MPF: /Y Citizen stop!
Me: /me Hears the worst noise he could hear stops in fear
MPF: /me runs up to citizen
MPF: You again.
ME: /me gulps
MPF: Do you remeber what i said to you earlyer?
ME: Yes officer.
MPF: Good face the wall.
ME: /me Faces the wall in fear
MPF:/me attemps to tie citizen (resist)
ME: /me does not ressit and lets the officer tie his hands together
MPF: /ME Pats down the citizen
MPF: Cleaned
MPF: /me flicks stun baton on letting the bright bue light show
ME: /me Closes his eyes at the sound of the stun stick being turned on
MPF: /me Swings his baton at the citizen back 3 times
ME: gets hit and screams in pain
ME: /y Ahh ! it hurts!
MPF: Turns baton off and unrties citizen
MPF: Hope you learned your lesson.
ME: /me Stutters his words but manages to say Y-Yes ... Officer
MPF: Hahaha
ME: /me walks away slowly.
Character backstory: Growing up his father was in the army, so it was a rough family life, he constantly had to move and make new friends wasn't any easier since his father was a hard man. His father won many medals and was revered for his valor in the line of duty, sadly at the time around Henrys 19th birthday the combine attacked and took control of earth. His father was ruined when this happened, everything he worked for was ripped out of his life in a mere instant. Since that day his father had his honor beat out of him day by day at the hands of the MPF, he began going into a shed everyday and stayed there for hours. Henry was working hard to try and make a better life for himself in this new world he worked up enough favor with the officers to get more food and gain the ability to work out a little in his off time.

A few years passed since they took control of earth and the goal his fathers time went to was revealed, a rebel faction sprung up with his father leading them and tried to free some prisoners being transported. It was a glorious moment for most of the citizens but Jack was more worried than ever. His father had taken his childhood with his career, he did not want his fathers actions to cause him to lose everything he worked so hard for and even possibly his life at the hands of the MPF. Having fought a battle within his mind over the next few days while the rebels did their job liberating ration shipments and prisoners. Distraught he reached his decision, when his father entered the shed the next day he informed the nearest MPF officer of his fathers actions. The officer radio'd it in and they swarmed the shed. They pulled out the rebel factions five top leaders including his father. There were plans to raid the Nexus in the coming days, from what they found this particular group had the possibility to blow a hole into nexus from the sewers and possibly get out with a good number of firearms from the armory.
The next few days were filled with question after question, Jack was even given praise from a few of the recruits. He still couldn't decide if he made the correct choice or not, but what's done is done. The hardest day was the day they publicly executed his father, easy to say Jack wasn't in attendance. He knew fighting the combine could only ever end the way it did, but that didn't help the sorrow and guilt that now filled his heart. He was brought into questioning one last time, all the officer asked was why. Henry sat there for a good 5 minutes then simply uttered one word, Peace , the officer laughed then exited the room.

Jack now resides as a common human being, following orders and living his life to the fullest: doing nothing. He watches dully day in and day out at the citizens trying to get foods adn such - reporting any infractions people make. He always does it anonymously, notes of some kind - Always helping out when he can to keep these trouble makers from getting him involved. He helps pick up trash and other things when he can, but resides in the back of his room, remaining quiet.
Eventually - he made the decision that he has had enough sitting around. He knew his abilities, but he wanted to put every single one to the full test, he wanted to know what he truly could do. He made the decision that he wanted to join the Combiine forces, and patrol the streets as a protector. Removing the people causing trouble for other human beings themselves, to minimize the problems that could endanger common good citizens. He wanted to prove to others, to himself - that he was unique one that would either do something with his life - or die trying. Jack definitely has his head in the sky - but his feet are also well placed on the ground, like a mountain, un-moving and determined.


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**IC portion**
Name: Jack Henderson
Age: 27
Birth year:1991
Past crimes:None
Medical/Engineering experience:No
If yes, which (or both) and explain:
Why do you want to join the Union?:I would like to join the Union to domore for the citizens of the city and too keep crime a minimum on the streets of our wonderful city
Any other information you wish to share?: No
(OOC my little part for the admin's)
Your probably wondering why i have i redone it well it has been some days now and i thought it got deleted but with no answer so i redone it again sorry for any trouble if i have caused some sort of confusion i am very sorry for it but other than that enjoy my app :3




Last edited by jack.henderson19 on Sat Sep 01, 2012 1:21 am; edited 2 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Jack Henderson metro police app redone   Jack Henderson metro police app redone EmptyFri Aug 31, 2012 9:26 pm

The application is great, but backstory is not 3 paragraphs. Get that fixed as soon as possible.
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PostSubject: Re: Jack Henderson metro police app redone   Jack Henderson metro police app redone EmptyFri Aug 31, 2012 9:39 pm

Question is still this: Is anyone here ICly approved?
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PostSubject: Re: Jack Henderson metro police app redone   Jack Henderson metro police app redone EmptySat Sep 01, 2012 1:04 am

I will fix the story and yes i have asked A mpf officer and have enough points ;3
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PostSubject: Re: Jack Henderson metro police app redone   Jack Henderson metro police app redone EmptySat Sep 01, 2012 1:21 am

Edited done :3
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PostSubject: Re: Jack Henderson metro police app redone   Jack Henderson metro police app redone EmptySun Sep 02, 2012 8:15 am

*Bump*
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PostSubject: Re: Jack Henderson metro police app redone   Jack Henderson metro police app redone EmptyTue Sep 04, 2012 8:34 pm

I would suggest getting a fix up on your grammar and spelling. (Placing comma, and earlier*, not earlyer.)
Else than that, Accepted!
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