Xq28Gaming
Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.


Temporary Forums for the Xq28 Gaming Community
 
HomePortalSearchLatest imagesRegisterLog in

 

 Andrew Mann's Application Form

Go down 
4 posters
AuthorMessage
Superlouis66
User



Posts : 7
Join date : 2012-10-03

Andrew Mann's Application Form Empty
PostSubject: Andrew Mann's Application Form   Andrew Mann's Application Form EmptyWed Oct 03, 2012 3:46 am

--OOC INFORMATION--
Username: iixSuperlouisx
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:43631222
Ban history: Once on a build server (pretty irelivent)
RP Expirience: DarkRP and Turtlesoupgamings HL2RP
CP Expirence: None, however i have always wanted to have a CP char.
RP example/commands: /me /it /droptokens (i also know a few cp voice commands)
Backstory: Just your average joe, worked as a car mechanic to earn money to get a flat however during the combine taking over the earth he wanted to side with them to survive. (he belies this and says he beleives in the combines point of veiw of uncivilized nature)

--IC INFORMATION--
Name: Andrew Mann
Age: 29
Birth year: 7/271986
Past crimes: Smoked(before the combine) and ran (when combine arrived)
Medical/Engineering: SLIGHT engineering, (used to fix cars)
Aditional info: I love the xq28 server and my charicter is speedy and agile rather than strong and well-build.
Back to top Go down
Kurochi
Developer



Posts : 285
Join date : 2012-08-18

Andrew Mann's Application Form Empty
PostSubject: Re: Andrew Mann's Application Form   Andrew Mann's Application Form EmptyWed Oct 03, 2012 3:52 am

Application is completely wrong.
Back to top Go down
Superlouis66
User



Posts : 7
Join date : 2012-10-03

Andrew Mann's Application Form Empty
PostSubject: I don't see why its wrong but heres my new app -_-   Andrew Mann's Application Form EmptyWed Oct 03, 2012 4:29 am

**OOC portion**
Steam username: iixSuperlouisx
SteamID: STEAM_0:1:43631222
Ban history: None on this server
Past RP experience: DarkRP and a previous HL2RP
Past CP experience: None
RP example: (Use commands from OA (20 lines minimum) or type up a short story)
Character backstory: Andrew Mann was born on the 7/27/1986 he grew up like any normal person would, he had 1 sister and one brother however both were younger than him. His father who was an ex-soldier that had settled down and had a family and his mother owned a local pasteries shop. when he grew up Andrew Mann became an apprentice mechanic helping out at a nearby garage fixing cars and whatnot. As most teenagers were Andrew was quite rebellious and smoked weed and drank alcohol a few times.

When Andrew had grown to the age of 21 he decided to get a proper job and using his decent knowladge on fixing things made a buisness that fixed cars radios and any junk people wanted. If he found onld bits and bobs, he would fix them and sell them at his work place. Andrew's fixing buisness went quite well and he made enough money to buy a decent house and eventually at the age of 24 he had a wife and a daughter of his own.

When the combine came he was split apart from his family, and his wife was taken into a different city and his daughter killed. He decided not to act rashly and even though many wouldn't actually liked the combine as nobody ever caused trouble around them. Apart from the odd nasty MPF Andrew got on quite well in this new world. He decided he would start afresh and be like one officer he met, helpfull and decisive yet follow orders exactly as given. Another reason he decided to join the MPF was that they reminded him of his dad who was unfortunatly too killed due to having a military involved past.


____________________________________________________________________________________________________
**IC portion**
Name: Andrew Mann
Age: 29
Birth year: 7/27/1986
Past crimes: Smoked weed and Drank alcohol irresponsibly. (after the combine came he was told of for running once.)
Medical/Engineering experience: Yes [x] No [ ]
If yes, which (or both) and explain: Slight engineering, charicter used to fix cars.
Why do you want to join the Union?: To side with the combine and also because they remind him of his dad (partially)
Any other information you wish to share?: My char is usually a thinker and is fast rather than brawny and strong.
Back to top Go down
CLASSIFIED
Head Super Admin
CLASSIFIED


Posts : 223
Join date : 2012-08-29
Age : 27
Location : 'N Yer but

Andrew Mann's Application Form Empty
PostSubject: Re: Andrew Mann's Application Form   Andrew Mann's Application Form EmptyWed Oct 03, 2012 4:50 am

Still wrong....
Back to top Go down
*|PEZ|* Shadow
User
*|PEZ|* Shadow


Posts : 28
Join date : 2012-08-26

Andrew Mann's Application Form Empty
PostSubject: Re: Andrew Mann's Application Form   Andrew Mann's Application Form EmptyWed Oct 03, 2012 4:53 am

Rp example needs to be 10-20 lines long, also make the back story three paragraphs instead of one.
Back to top Go down
CLASSIFIED
Head Super Admin
CLASSIFIED


Posts : 223
Join date : 2012-08-29
Age : 27
Location : 'N Yer but

Andrew Mann's Application Form Empty
PostSubject: Re: Andrew Mann's Application Form   Andrew Mann's Application Form EmptyWed Oct 03, 2012 4:59 am

*|PEZ|* Shadow wrote:
Rp example needs to be 10-20 lines long, also make the back story three paragraphs instead of one.

^What this guy said, sorry I just found you so hopeless I felt it wouldn't make a difference.
Back to top Go down
Superlouis66
User



Posts : 7
Join date : 2012-10-03

Andrew Mann's Application Form Empty
PostSubject: Re: Andrew Mann's Application Form   Andrew Mann's Application Form EmptyWed Oct 03, 2012 5:12 am

FUCK ME! it would be nice if you HELped me out1 i don't know whats wrong about my second one! it has three clear paragraphs about the young version of Andrew the teenage one And when the combing came! this is my new app and if its wrong FUCKING TELL ME WHY!

**OOC portion**
Steam username: iixSuperlouisx
SteamID: STEAM_0:1:43631222
Ban history: None on this server
Past RP experience: DarkRP and a previous HL2RP
Past CP experience: None
RP example: (A citizen attempts to enter the slums)

MPF: Hold it right there!
Cit: But i need to enter!
MPF: What reasons do you have? the slums is out of bounds.
Cit: Uhh.
Cit: /me attempts to punch the officer in the face
MPF: /me Takes the blow to the face and retailiates with a swift kick
Cit: /me attempts to dodge the blow and counter
(the two decide wether this should happen)
Cit: /it the civillian fails to dodge the kick and it hits him with alarming force
MPF: /me Attempts to pull out his stun stick while the man is reacting
Cit: /me Winces in pain from the kick and attempts to barge past the officer
MPF: /me Turns the stunstick on with a click and chases after the civillian heading for the slums.
(the two decide wether he makes it in)
Cit: /me Runs full pelt into the slums.
MPF: /it To the citizens dismay the officer manages to catch up and tackle him, giving time for other citizens to get the officer help
other MPF: Stop right there!
Civ: /me Tries to get free of the officer but fails.
Civ: /me sees the appraching backup and desperatly attempts to get out
(the three decide the civ should be captured due to being outnumbered)
other MPF: /me Pulls out his stun stick and flips it on, he then proceeds to hit the man over the head untill he is unconcious
MPF: Suspect detained, take him to the Nexus
other MPF: /me drags the unconcious civillian to the Nexus to decide how to give civil judgement
Character backstory: Andrew Mann was born on the 7/27/1986 he grew up like any normal person would, he had 1 sister and one brother however both were younger than him. His father who was an ex-soldier that had settled down and had a family and his mother owned a local pasteries shop. when he grew up Andrew Mann became an apprentice mechanic helping out at a nearby garage fixing cars and whatnot. As most teenagers were Andrew was quite rebellious and smoked weed and drank alcohol a few times.

When Andrew had grown to the age of 21 he decided to get a proper job and using his decent knowladge on fixing things made a buisness that fixed cars radios and any junk people wanted. If he found old bits and bobs, he would fix them and sell them at his work place. Andrew's fixing buisness went quite well and he made enough money to buy a decent house and eventually at the age of 24 he had a wife and a daughter of his own.

When the combine came he was split apart from his family, and his wife was taken into a different city and his daughter killed. He decided not to act rashly and even though many wouldn't actually liked the combine as nobody ever caused trouble around them. Apart from the odd nasty MPF Andrew got on quite well in this new world. He decided he would start afresh and be like one officer he met, helpfull and decisive yet follow orders exactly as given. Another reason he decided to join the MPF was that they reminded him of his dad who was unfortunatly too killed due to having a military involved past.


____________________________________________________________________________________________________
**IC portion**
Name: Andrew Mann
Age: 29
Birth year: 7/27/1986
Past crimes: Smoked weed and Drank alcohol irresponsibly. (after the combine came he was told of for running once.)
Medical/Engineering experience: Yes [x] No [ ]
If yes, which (or both) and explain: Slight engineering, charicter used to fix cars.
Why do you want to join the Union?: To side with the combine and also because they remind him of his dad (partially)
Any other information you wish to share?: My char is usually a thinker and is fast rather than brawny and strong.

Sorry for getting angry but i hope this is ok.
Back to top Go down
CLASSIFIED
Head Super Admin
CLASSIFIED


Posts : 223
Join date : 2012-08-29
Age : 27
Location : 'N Yer but

Andrew Mann's Application Form Empty
PostSubject: Re: Andrew Mann's Application Form   Andrew Mann's Application Form EmptyWed Oct 03, 2012 5:23 am

Still wrong. Notice how the last part says In character portion? Do you refer to yourself in the third person in real life? "Him, He".

P.S. Calm yo titties.
Back to top Go down
Superlouis66
User



Posts : 7
Join date : 2012-10-03

Andrew Mann's Application Form Empty
PostSubject: Re: Andrew Mann's Application Form   Andrew Mann's Application Form EmptyWed Oct 03, 2012 5:36 am

I can see im going to get on JUUUUSSST finde withe forum admins (not)

**OOC portion**
Steam username: iixSuperlouisx
SteamID: STEAM_0:1:43631222
Ban history: None on this server
Past RP experience: DarkRP and a previous HL2RP
Past CP experience: None
RP example: (A citizen attempts to enter the slums)

MPF: Hold it right there!
Cit: But i need to enter!
MPF: What reasons do you have? the slums is out of bounds.
Cit: Uhh.
Cit: /me attempts to punch the officer in the face
MPF: /me Takes the blow to the face and retailiates with a swift kick
Cit: /me attempts to dodge the blow and counter
(the two decide wether this should happen)
Cit: /it the civillian fails to dodge the kick and it hits him with alarming force
MPF: /me Attempts to pull out his stun stick while the man is reacting
Cit: /me Winces in pain from the kick and attempts to barge past the officer
MPF: /me Turns the stunstick on with a click and chases after the civillian heading for the slums.
(the two decide wether he makes it in)
Cit: /me Runs full pelt into the slums.
MPF: /it To the citizens dismay the officer manages to catch up and tackle him, giving time for other citizens to get the officer help
other MPF: Stop right there!
Civ: /me Tries to get free of the officer but fails.
Civ: /me sees the appraching backup and desperatly attempts to get out
(the three decide the civ should be captured due to being outnumbered)
other MPF: /me Pulls out his stun stick and flips it on, he then proceeds to hit the man over the head untill he is unconcious
MPF: Suspect detained, take him to the Nexus
other MPF: /me drags the unconcious civillian to the Nexus to decide how to give civil judgement
Character backstory: Andrew Mann was born on the 7/27/1986 he grew up like any normal person would, he had 1 sister and one brother however both were younger than him. His father who was an ex-soldier that had settled down and had a family and his mother owned a local pasteries shop. when he grew up Andrew Mann became an apprentice mechanic helping out at a nearby garage fixing cars and whatnot. As most teenagers were Andrew was quite rebellious and smoked weed and drank alcohol a few times.

When Andrew had grown to the age of 21 he decided to get a proper job and using his decent knowladge on fixing things made a buisness that fixed cars radios and any junk people wanted. If he found old bits and bobs, he would fix them and sell them at his work place. Andrew's fixing buisness went quite well and he made enough money to buy a decent house and eventually at the age of 24 he had a wife and a daughter of his own.

When the combine came he was split apart from his family, and his wife was taken into a different city and his daughter killed. He decided not to act rashly and even though many wouldn't actually liked the combine as nobody ever caused trouble around them. Apart from the odd nasty MPF Andrew got on quite well in this new world. He decided he would start afresh and be like one officer he met, helpfull and decisive yet follow orders exactly as given. Another reason he decided to join the MPF was that they reminded him of his dad who was unfortunatly too killed due to having a military involved past.


____________________________________________________________________________________________________
**IC portion**
Name: Andrew Mann
Age: 29
Birth year: 7/27/1986
Past crimes: I smoked weed and Drank alcohol irresponsibly. ((after the combine came he was told of for running once.)) ((<-- See this? it has a (( and )) that means its OOC Razz))
Medical/Engineering experience: Yes [x] No [ ]
If yes, which (or both) and explain: Slight engineering, I used to fix cars. (( not IRL ))
Why do you want to join the Union?: I want to join the union to side with the combine as they are civilized and keep things safe and also because they remind him of my dad ((partially))
)
Any other information you wish to share?: I usually am a thinker and am fast rather than brawny and strong.
Back to top Go down
CLASSIFIED
Head Super Admin
CLASSIFIED


Posts : 223
Join date : 2012-08-29
Age : 27
Location : 'N Yer but

Andrew Mann's Application Form Empty
PostSubject: Re: Andrew Mann's Application Form   Andrew Mann's Application Form EmptyWed Oct 03, 2012 5:41 am

Alright, now skip a line in between your character backstory and the end of the rp example.
Back to top Go down
Superlouis66
User



Posts : 7
Join date : 2012-10-03

Andrew Mann's Application Form Empty
PostSubject: Re: Andrew Mann's Application Form   Andrew Mann's Application Form EmptyWed Oct 03, 2012 6:01 am

Pleeeaaaase! no more! *cries*

**OOC portion**
Steam username: iixSuperlouisx
SteamID: STEAM_0:1:43631222
Ban history: None on this server
Past RP experience: DarkRP and a previous HL2RP
Past CP experience: None
RP example: (A citizen attempts to enter the slums)

MPF: Hold it right there!
Cit: But i need to enter!
MPF: What reasons do you have? the slums is out of bounds.
Cit: Uhh.
Cit: /me attempts to punch the officer in the face
MPF: /me Takes the blow to the face and retailiates with a swift kick
Cit: /me attempts to dodge the blow and counter
(the two decide wether this should happen)
Cit: /it the civillian fails to dodge the kick and it hits him with alarming force
MPF: /me Attempts to pull out his stun stick while the man is reacting
Cit: /me Winces in pain from the kick and attempts to barge past the officer
MPF: /me Turns the stunstick on with a click and chases after the civillian heading for the slums.
(the two decide wether he makes it in)
Cit: /me Runs full pelt into the slums.
MPF: /it To the citizens dismay the officer manages to catch up and tackle him, giving time for other citizens to get the officer help
other MPF: Stop right there!
Civ: /me Tries to get free of the officer but fails.
Civ: /me sees the appraching backup and desperatly attempts to get out
(the three decide the civ should be captured due to being outnumbered)
other MPF: /me Pulls out his stun stick and flips it on, he then proceeds to hit the man over the head untill he is unconcious
MPF: Suspect detained, take him to the Nexus
other MPF: /me drags the unconcious civillian to the Nexus to decide how to give civil judgement

Character backstory: Andrew Mann was born on the 7/27/1986 he grew up like any normal person would, he had 1 sister and one brother however both were younger than him. His father who was an ex-soldier that had settled down and had a family and his mother owned a local pasteries shop. when he grew up Andrew Mann became an apprentice mechanic helping out at a nearby garage fixing cars and whatnot. As most teenagers were Andrew was quite rebellious and smoked weed and drank alcohol a few times.

When Andrew had grown to the age of 21 he decided to get a proper job and using his decent knowladge on fixing things made a buisness that fixed cars radios and any junk people wanted. If he found old bits and bobs, he would fix them and sell them at his work place. Andrew's fixing buisness went quite well and he made enough money to buy a decent house and eventually at the age of 24 he had a wife and a daughter of his own.

When the combine came he was split apart from his family, and his wife was taken into a different city and his daughter killed. He decided not to act rashly and even though many wouldn't actually liked the combine as nobody ever caused trouble around them. Apart from the odd nasty MPF Andrew got on quite well in this new world. He decided he would start afresh and be like one officer he met, helpfull and decisive yet follow orders exactly as given. Another reason he decided to join the MPF was that they reminded him of his dad who was unfortunatly too killed due to having a military involved past.


____________________________________________________________________________________________________
**IC portion**
Name: Andrew Mann
Age: 29
Birth year: 7/27/1986
Past crimes: I smoked weed and Drank alcohol irresponsibly. ((after the combine came he was told of for running once.)) ((<-- See this? it has a (( and )) that means its OOC ))
Medical/Engineering experience: Yes [x] No [ ]
If yes, which (or both) and explain: Slight engineering, I used to fix cars. (( not IRL ))
Why do you want to join the Union?: I want to join the union to side with the combine as they are civilized and keep things safe and also because they remind him of my dad ((partially))
)
Any other information you wish to share?: I usually am a thinker and am fast rather than brawny and strong.
Back to top Go down
CLASSIFIED
Head Super Admin
CLASSIFIED


Posts : 223
Join date : 2012-08-29
Age : 27
Location : 'N Yer but

Andrew Mann's Application Form Empty
PostSubject: Re: Andrew Mann's Application Form   Andrew Mann's Application Form EmptyWed Oct 03, 2012 6:09 am

Getting close bud! Who gave you permission to make this app and how many loyalty points do you have?
Back to top Go down
Kurochi
Developer



Posts : 285
Join date : 2012-08-18

Andrew Mann's Application Form Empty
PostSubject: Re: Andrew Mann's Application Form   Andrew Mann's Application Form EmptyWed Oct 03, 2012 6:19 am

Concomise, Want to have a three way with me and my BF? So much respect.
Back to top Go down
CLASSIFIED
Head Super Admin
CLASSIFIED


Posts : 223
Join date : 2012-08-29
Age : 27
Location : 'N Yer but

Andrew Mann's Application Form Empty
PostSubject: Re: Andrew Mann's Application Form   Andrew Mann's Application Form EmptyWed Oct 03, 2012 6:21 am

Classified, Concomise = Two different people.

Classified > Concomise

And yes, I will.
Back to top Go down
Superlouis66
User



Posts : 7
Join date : 2012-10-03

Andrew Mann's Application Form Empty
PostSubject: Re: Andrew Mann's Application Form   Andrew Mann's Application Form EmptyWed Oct 03, 2012 6:29 am

Ok, the officer is MPF-C18.03.31587 and i have 5 loyalty points
Back to top Go down
CLASSIFIED
Head Super Admin
CLASSIFIED


Posts : 223
Join date : 2012-08-29
Age : 27
Location : 'N Yer but

Andrew Mann's Application Form Empty
PostSubject: Re: Andrew Mann's Application Form   Andrew Mann's Application Form EmptyWed Oct 03, 2012 6:31 am

Superlouis66 wrote:
Ok, the officer is MPF-C18.03.31587 and i have 5 loyalty points

Alright, now that that's all over with. *Ahem*

Denied!


You smoked pot.



Jk +Support
Back to top Go down
Kurochi
Developer



Posts : 285
Join date : 2012-08-18

Andrew Mann's Application Form Empty
PostSubject: Re: Andrew Mann's Application Form   Andrew Mann's Application Form EmptyWed Oct 03, 2012 7:54 am

Accepted.
Back to top Go down
Superlouis66
User



Posts : 7
Join date : 2012-10-03

Andrew Mann's Application Form Empty
PostSubject: Re: Andrew Mann's Application Form   Andrew Mann's Application Form EmptyThu Oct 04, 2012 12:15 am

Thanks, sorry for flipping out with the f-bomb. Also, i suck at applications DX

cheers All hail the admins cheers
Back to top Go down
CLASSIFIED
Head Super Admin
CLASSIFIED


Posts : 223
Join date : 2012-08-29
Age : 27
Location : 'N Yer but

Andrew Mann's Application Form Empty
PostSubject: Re: Andrew Mann's Application Form   Andrew Mann's Application Form EmptyThu Oct 04, 2012 2:50 am

Superlouis66 wrote:
cheers All hail the admins cheers

^Damn straight^
Back to top Go down
Sponsored content





Andrew Mann's Application Form Empty
PostSubject: Re: Andrew Mann's Application Form   Andrew Mann's Application Form Empty

Back to top Go down
 
Andrew Mann's Application Form
Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» Mentle's MPF Application.
» Jordon's Application
» Richard's MPF application
» I Reckonz I Application
» A_Crazed_Hobo's MPF Application!

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Xq28Gaming :: Half-Life 2 Roleplay Section :: Metropolice Force :: Applications-
Jump to: